I don't want to be rude, but what the **** was that!!
HAHAHA...that's hilarious! You just made my day.
The music was bad. Do you not listen to music for fun? Hip hop? Dance? Trance? Is there anything in your iTunes library with a glitchy beat, as that seems to be what you were aiming for? Anything you can get inspiration from? Really, the sound was annoying. I don't know how we can help you, as I don't believe we can help you we watch the videos you post as your music improves. I'm not a musician myself, so maybe I shouldn't talk, but that was very bad.
But here's the thing.....the video was worse. I couldn't even watch the entire thing. I'm still trying to figure out what it was about. I'm actually curious to know, because I can't figure it out. It was just a melee of random videos.