I liked it, there's only a few suggestions I have though;
- replace the Ruby iMac commercial with
This One.
- Take out the second iMac G4 commercial (the one with the guy and the window) - it was just too much for one product.
- the apple logo at the end was squished
- switch the font at the end to either "Apple Garamond" (Apple's traditional marketing font) or "Myriad" (which Apple uses in more modern marketing)- If you have them.